Lots of similes
Rhyming
It's flows really well
Paints a picture in your head
Uses comedy
Lots of metaphor
Repeated lines
Bible
My keys are important they carry the ability for me to get in and out of my house and my car keys helps me with transportation, my wallet makes it so I buy food when my wallet is full it puts me in a good mood, I always carry 2 pens a soapstone pen for welding and marking metal my pen is always important because it marks certain things.
The feelings that I carry are the sadness of my moms passing this causes me a lot of pain because I lost her at a 14 I lost before I was even a teen, I always carry the fear of having no friends and that I'll be lonely forever sometime I wish I never had friends, happiness is an odd occurrence for me, it only seems to come when I am free.
I carry the memory of the day I got my first kiss, it was the happiest of my life I had gotten over a huge hump in my somehow at teenage life.mot was the first time I feel in love and because of that I got attached and my heart broken but out of that came one of best friendships today.
The saddest memory I carry is the passing of my mom I never got to say goodbye to her. She was the only mom I had and now I have to deal with the pain of that I never got to say goodbye to her and that I can no longer call her and talk to her whenever I want
I believe that you should be nice to everyone you meet because you don't know who they are or what the things they carry are, be nice to everyone because one day they might remember that and give you something back
I carry the hope that one I will have a nice big house and good welding job that pays over 100,000$ a year and that I will have a son who will be a Mini me.
Pain is a burn that never leaves.
The feelings that I carry are the sadness of my moms passing the truth is this causes me a lot of pain even though I may not show it, A quote my grandmother likes is" Death leaves a heartache that no one can heal, but love leaves memories no one can steal". My depression is a cloud just forever hanging over me never leaving. I can still see the pain in my dads eyes the day we found out she died. In 10-20 I will still miss her and love her but I will forever know she is in a better place. Her hand print on my wall still emminates energy as if she was still here. I lost her at a 14 I lost before I was even a teen, I always carry the fear of having no friends and that I'll be lonely forever sometime I wish I never had friends, happiness is an odd occurrence for me, it only seems to come when I am free.
